Pre. Writing

The mistake of leaving

FCE Writing Practice Test 1

In the language class we did FCE Writing Practice. Our first activity was to write a story trying not to use the words because, although and but, so we had to use connectors. We create a chart with this connectors. We also had to use to write the story the following things:

• Simple Past, Past continuous (1 examples)
• Past Perect (2 examples)
• Direct Speech (3 examples)
• Connectors (4 examples)
• Good descriptive adjetives (7 examples)
• N° of words 150-180

The story must begin with the following sentence then the rest of the story we could invented...

''When he found his seat on the plane, Sam recognized the person who he was sitting in the seat next to him''

The mistake of leaving

When he found his seat on the plane, Sam recognized the person who was sitting in the seat next to him. It was his new chief, his father.

 When Sam was ten years old his father left as he was in love with another woman. Since the day he left he never saw him again until that moment. Sam looked at him and told him his hold name therefore he recognized him. ''You look alike a person I knew years ago'' the chief said, ''Really? , like who?'' Sam asked. ''It doesn't matter, it's someone I left a long time ago (thing I regret) and he must hate me'' the chief said while he turn his head down, ''How can you be so sure he hates you? You haven't saw him in a long time'' the chief opened his eyes surprislly and asked ''Can I ask you a question?, A really personal question?... what is your mother's name?'', ''Elva Ticano... Why?'', ''You are my son! I'm sorry for leaving you and your mother I  left you two thinking I was in love with another women as she was pretty, intelligent, rich, powerful instead of being kind, selfish and helpful, that I should had appreciate from your mother'' 

Sam is the man on the left, in that moment he had just recognized the man sitting to his right.